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Drive by ~Limitedsightman:iconLimitedsightman:

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Drive, and don't stop,
untill you reach,
the very top,
Be the fastest,
Be the best,
Above all else,
Don't protest,

Drive, and do not halt,
For if you do,
Your at fault,
Be the fastest,
be the best,
Above all else,
Don't protest,

Drive, keep clawing,
For others  cause,
Your falling,
Be the fastest,
Be the best,
Above all else,
Don't protest,

Drive, do not care,
If someones hopes,
You impair,
Be the fastest,
Be the best,
Above all else,
Don't protest,

Drive, keep alive,
Undermine, decieve,
Destroy, connive
Stay alive, Stay alive,
Drive
©2008-2009 ~Limitedsightman
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Numbah.... awww jeez I forgot the number.... 8, I think. Yeah, let's go with that. NUMBAH 8. This one is written Sarcastically. I mean teh exact opposite.

EDIT: After further review, this is NUMBAH 9.
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~otterski:iconotterski: May 12, 2008, 4:39:46 PM
Hah. I was feeling inspired till I read the artists comments. :nod:
~Limitedsightman:iconLimitedsightman: May 12, 2008, 4:41:34 PM
Oh sorry.... I wrote it as a "The World spins to fast" kinda thing. Ya'know like, we are totally moving 10 times faster than we need to be.

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Look! Up in the sky!!! Its the Blind Symbol! Quickly Mute Girl, get me my mask!

"............."

Thank you Mute Girl.

*Dons mask; BACKWARDS!!!*

LIMITED SIGHT MAN IS BORN!!!!
~otterski:iconotterski: May 12, 2008, 4:45:04 PM
Well, what about the people left behind?
~Limitedsightman:iconLimitedsightman: May 12, 2008, 4:46:54 PM
I'm confused... I'm yelling at the world in this poem... oh well. Watch me!!

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Look! Up in the sky!!! Its the Blind Symbol! Quickly Mute Girl, get me my mask!

"............."

Thank you Mute Girl.

*Dons mask; BACKWARDS!!!*

LIMITED SIGHT MAN IS BORN!!!!
~otterski:iconotterski: May 12, 2008, 4:51:20 PM
Haha! Yes! I will wait and watch most eagerly.

I get what you meant, with the aid of the artists comments. I'm just saying, matter of factly, I was inspired when it was intended otherwise. Kind of funny, no? It's a good poem, just conveys to me a different message than you meant. Someone else'll get it, I'm just weird.
~Limitedsightman:iconLimitedsightman: May 12, 2008, 4:52:43 PM
Nooooo, watch as in, the button on my page that says "watch this deviant."

It's good you understand.

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Look! Up in the sky!!! Its the Blind Symbol! Quickly Mute Girl, get me my mask!

"............."

Thank you Mute Girl.

*Dons mask; BACKWARDS!!!*

LIMITED SIGHT MAN IS BORN!!!!
~otterski:iconotterski: May 12, 2008, 5:00:04 PM
Oh right. There's some sort of awkward communication barrier between us. It causes me to misinterpret everything you say. >.<
~Limitedsightman:iconLimitedsightman: May 12, 2008, 5:03:44 PM
apparently.

Check out :iconfireonh2o: She's really good at the writing thing. Check out :iconsolong-notgoodnight: too.

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Look! Up in the sky!!! Its the Blind Symbol! Quickly Mute Girl, get me my mask!

"............."

Thank you Mute Girl.

*Dons mask; BACKWARDS!!!*

LIMITED SIGHT MAN IS BORN!!!!
~SoLong-NotGoodNight:iconSoLong-NotGoodNight: May 12, 2008, 6:51:13 PM
hey! YEAH! check me out!!

ha ha ah

nice! i love it! what do u mean though, by "u mean the opposite"?

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I love Paramore ♥

Oh ur a naughty girl! u need a spanking! ...ugh that got gross. --Me

Check out my stuffs...[link] :)

Love me hate me, you'll never break me...unless you do....
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